Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Critique Feedback

Use of color: There is way too much blue used in the "White Objects Painting". The colors in the "Surface and texture" painting are very accurate.



Illusion of Volume and depth: In the "white object painting" things seem very boxy and kind of on top of each other. Things do not seem to have the right amount of space between them. Yet, in the "surface and texture" painting things have come a long way while volume and depth come into life with accuracy.



Composition: both paintings seem to have good placement and objects, neither has to many things or too little.



Improvements: color accuracy has improved tremendously. Actual objects look more precise.

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